Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
Shop deviantART for the
holidays and save BIG!
Click here! :holly:
[x]

deviantART

 
©2009 *Ayumi-chaaan
:iconayumi-chaaan:

Artist's Comments

The next Naruto couple request! This time it's OCxOC! :D

I love Airi's design...it's so pretty :D

Hmm...am I allowed to enter this into her contes too?


Naruto belongs to Masashi Kishimoto
Airi and Taiki belong to *Chloeeh
Art belongs to me :D
Ref used - [link]

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconchloeeh:
Awesome :) I love it - thankyou so much for doing this for me ^^ :hug:
And sure, of course you can enter it in my contest :)
:icon1simply2me3:
:wow::wow::wow::wow::wow::wow::wow::wow::wow::wow:
This is AWE-SOME :D

--
Art is an art itself
"Who I am hates who've I been" -Relient K
Icon: base by =pockypixels and the rest is me, other side of icon is ~GopherChucks101
:icongopherchucks101:
Looks great!

--
[link] please visit my dragons I would love you forever!

--
Avatar belongs: base -> =pockypixels and the rest was made by ~1Simply2Me3 who has the other half of this
:iconayumi-chaaan:
Glad you like it ^^

Ok then, enter it in! :D

--
:D
--
"No person is your friend who demands your silence, or denies your right to grow.” - Alice Walker
:iconayumi-chaaan:
Thanks XD

--
:D
--
"No person is your friend who demands your silence, or denies your right to grow.” - Alice Walker
:iconayumi-chaaan:
Thanks :D

--
:D
--
"No person is your friend who demands your silence, or denies your right to grow.” - Alice Walker
:icongopherchucks101:
Your welcome

--
[link] please visit my dragons I would love you forever!

--
Avatar belongs: base -> =pockypixels and the rest was made by ~1Simply2Me3 who has the other half of this
:icon1simply2me3:
Your welcome :D

--
Art is an art itself
"Who I am hates who've I been" -Relient K
Icon: base by =pockypixels and the rest is me, other side of icon is ~GopherChucks101
:iconpanda-spirit:
It's very nice. C:

Though, if you've read the tutorials I sent you a while ago, you would know that the torso is two heads long.

Plus, the guy's face is completely out of proportion. The mouth is dragged out to the right too much. If you remove the girl, you'll see that his mouth would be deformed in some sort.

Also, the hair isn't just one flat piece of fondue. It has many shadows and highlights, even if it's just anime-styled hair.

Furthermore, you literally have NO light source. I suggest in the sketch you should make a little sun somewhere so you can keep in mind the shadows and highlights.

Yet again the colors smudge into each other, even though it's digital; where it should NOT be smudging. You are over using the blur-tool. I suggest you attempt to take the depth of the clothes, hair, and skin into serious consideration and not just slab shadows here and there.

Now, coloring dark clothes is pretty hard, but I suggest you use majorly bright highlights or choose a lighter base color and be heavy with the shadows.

Also you are in desperate need for shadows, because they are not wearing latex or leather or spandex. Even if they were wearing those, they'd have more folds than what you showed here.

Last, but not least, please practice more on the hands. You cannot cheat with the fingers like that, they are not stiff like hooks, or floppy like play-doh.

Over all, you need a lot of work.


Good effort, though! :meow:

--
O.M.G.
Oh. My. Greg.

Details

September 20
457 KB
292 KB
600×905

Statistics

21
9 [who?]
167 (0 today)
4 (0 today)

Site Map